In which Ava craves apples
Chapter one is good. Just getting to know the daughter. Tomorrow, I will read chapter 2.
Cool! Thanks for checking the story out!!
I’ve stumbled upon this and am glad. It is an effective world you have started to create. The fantasy formula is present enough to to make it comfortable, but diverged from enough to keep me wondering. The characters are engaging. Good work.
Thank you so much for commenting! Hopefully the characters will stay engaging in the coming chapters haha
This looks really cool! Gonna save it to read up on later.
ahh thank you!! 😊
Just read through, always a fan of fae antics lol. Looking forward to see what’s next for Aveline!
ahh thanks!!! I'm hoping to post it this weekend XD
Your writing is absolutely delicious. And the name Avelina is so beautiful. I’m very very intrigued!
ahhh thank you! I’m trying to not be super duper fast-paced this go around, so I’m glad you’re intrigued! I was worried it’d be boring 😆
Oh the pacing felt PERFECT! I absolutely love the descriptive language you used.
Chapter one is good. Just getting to know the daughter. Tomorrow, I will read chapter 2.
Cool! Thanks for checking the story out!!
I’ve stumbled upon this and am glad. It is an effective world you have started to create. The fantasy formula is present enough to to make it comfortable, but diverged from enough to keep me wondering. The characters are engaging. Good work.
Thank you so much for commenting! Hopefully the characters will stay engaging in the coming chapters haha
This looks really cool! Gonna save it to read up on later.
ahh thank you!! 😊
Just read through, always a fan of fae antics lol. Looking forward to see what’s next for Aveline!
ahh thanks!!! I'm hoping to post it this weekend XD
Your writing is absolutely delicious. And the name Avelina is so beautiful. I’m very very intrigued!
ahhh thank you! I’m trying to not be super duper fast-paced this go around, so I’m glad you’re intrigued! I was worried it’d be boring 😆
Oh the pacing felt PERFECT! I absolutely love the descriptive language you used.