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Dear Clary's avatar

Chapter one is good. Just getting to know the daughter. Tomorrow, I will read chapter 2.

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Jim Dombroski's avatar

I’ve stumbled upon this and am glad. It is an effective world you have started to create. The fantasy formula is present enough to to make it comfortable, but diverged from enough to keep me wondering. The characters are engaging. Good work.

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